The Story Edit

A$950.00

Narrative analysis and strategy for organisations and people who have something worth saying and don't want it flattened into generic business language or AI-speak.

You'll send me your website and any other useful material — perhaps a pitch deck, brochure, project information, existing messaging or just some background about what you're trying to do.

I'll spend up to five hours reviewing it and thinking it through.

Within seven days you'll receive:

- a clear diagnosis of what's working and what isn't
- the strongest points of difference I can see
- the story I think is worth bringing forward
- three to five priority changes
- practical examples of stronger messaging where useful
- a clear order of operations for what to tackle next

- ways to share and grow your brand voice into the future
- an optional 30-minute follow-up conversation

One-off. No retainer. No subscription. No obligation to work together again.

Narrative analysis and strategy for organisations and people who have something worth saying and don't want it flattened into generic business language or AI-speak.

You'll send me your website and any other useful material — perhaps a pitch deck, brochure, project information, existing messaging or just some background about what you're trying to do.

I'll spend up to five hours reviewing it and thinking it through.

Within seven days you'll receive:

- a clear diagnosis of what's working and what isn't
- the strongest points of difference I can see
- the story I think is worth bringing forward
- three to five priority changes
- practical examples of stronger messaging where useful
- a clear order of operations for what to tackle next

- ways to share and grow your brand voice into the future
- an optional 30-minute follow-up conversation

One-off. No retainer. No subscription. No obligation to work together again.